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Tuesday, August 22, 2017

Starting with the Victim: Nancy J. Cohen on Writing Cozy Mysteries

My interview today is with Nancy J. Cohen who writes the Bad Hair Day Mysteries featuring South Florida hairstylist Marla Vail.  Several titles in this series have made the IMBA bestseller list, been selected by Suspense Magazine as a best cozy mystery, and won third place in the Arizona Literary Awards. Nancy has also written the instructional guide, Writing the Cozy Mystery. 

When she's not writing,  you may find her as a featured speaker at libraries, conferences, and community events. She is listed in Contemporary Authors, Poets & Writers, and Who's Who in U.S. Writers, Editors, & Poets. So let's move on to discover what makes her such a success. 

Your early books were science fiction romances which are quite different from the cozy mystery series you have been writing for a number of years. What it hard to transition from one genre to another?
I was already putting a mystery into my romances when I switched to writing a cozy mystery series. So the plotting process was similar, although the focus shifted. Instead of a romantic resolution coming at the end of book one in my mystery series, the romance subplot had to happen a lot slower and with much more subtlety. 



The biggest change was marketing to a different audience. Going to my first mystery conference was like being exposed to a new culture. Different expectations and genre conventions came into play. I had to cultivate an entirely new readership. So that was the hardest part of switching genres.

What makes for a good mystery? Tell me about the process.
Usually, I start with the victim. Then I decide who might want to kill him. The suspects get fleshed out with motives and secrets, and then I relate these people to each other. Often the one with the strongest motive becomes the killer. Or this person might make a better red herring. At this point, I’ll write a complete synopsis. The story might change as I write it, and that’s okay. Then I’ll go back and revise the synopsis accordingly. I may also keep a chapter-to-chapter outline to help me keep track of days of the week and who said what in previous scenes. The objective is to trick and distract the reader enough to keep her guessing until the end but to provide clues for fair play. Your readers want to solve the puzzle along with the sleuth. 


What type of research do you do for your books? 

I do research as needed while I’m writing. The research might involve a particular setting or merely an interesting topic I address in the story. Recently, I’ve been looking into acacia trees and their role in Egyptian mythology. I’ll also include local issues, such as children dying in hot cars in Florida. It gives me a chance to educate the public on preventive measures. This appears in Hair Brained, my Sept. 12 release and #14 in the Bad Hair Day series. My hairstylist sleuth, Marla Vail, learns about this topic while she’s interviewing suspects. After I finish my first draft, I’ll do two or three more sweeps for editing and polishing.

According to your bio, you are active with 6 writing groups. How do you find the time to be part of all these organizations? What would you tell other writers is the best reason to be active with writing groups?
It’s incredibly important to belong to professional writers’ organizations and participate in their online Yahoo groups. I learn so much about the business aspects of writing from other authors. Locally, I attend two meetings a month, once with romance writers and the other with mystery writers. I’ll attend national conferences depending upon the location and cost. You can’t write in a vacuum. It’s imperative to get connected with the writing community. You’ll make friends, find critique partners, and engage with like-minded individuals who love writing like you do.

What do you think the biggest error that new writers make in creating their first cozy mystery?
You need to give the heroine a personal motive to get involved. Just making her curious and nosy isn’t enough. If the stakes are high for her, your readers will care more deeply about what happens. So give her a strong motive to get involved. Also, give her the skills to solve the murder on her own. You can’t have her rely on the hero or on a force of nature to get her out of a fix. As in any first novel, backstory and flashbacks should be kept to a minimum. Keep the story moving forward with less expository passages and more dialogue and action.

How do you write? Did you do an outline first? Did you do individual character development before doing the full plot?
First I determine the setting, victim, and suspects. I’ll do profiles on these people so I can start to get to know them. Once these are set in my mind, I write a synopsis. Then the actual writing begins. The synopsis acts as my guideline, but that doesn’t mean I have to stick to it. Things change, and I’ll revise the synopsis to match the story. It’s easier writing a series because you already know the recurrent characters. So mainly I have to create a new cast of suspects for each mystery. They’ll each have a secret and these people will be interrelated, although their connections won’t be evident until later in the book.

What type of publicity do you do to promote your book? What has worked best for you in generating sales?
For a book release, I’ll do an online blog tour (next one starts on Sept. 12), a Goodreads giveaway, Rafflecopter contests, in-person signings, conference workshops, a book launch party on Facebook, and frequent social media posts. On release day, I’ll send out a newsletter to announce the new release as well as a blog post. As for what works best—who knows?

What do you know now about writing/publishing now that you wished you had known sooner?
Stick to what you like to write and build up your repertoire. If I’d known this, I might not have switched genres back and forth. But at the time, indie publishing wasn’t available, and you had to write what would sell.

What is the best advice you've been given about writing or that you've learned that you would like to pass along?
Writing is an ongoing journey. We never stop learning and improving. If you stumble, pick yourself up and carry on. The only way to never get published is to quit.

What other works do you have in the process?
I’m currently working on Trimmed to Death, # 15 in the Bad Hair Day Mysteries. I am also continuing with my revised backlist mystery Author’s Editions. The first three titles in my series are in audiobook, so I’d like to continue with these as well.

Are there any other points you’d like to cover?
Please support your favorite authors by writing reviews of their books at online sites. On Amazon especially, the number of reviews counts toward algorithms that Amazon uses to recommend books to new readers. All you need to do is say a few words about why you liked a story and post a customer review. It means a lot.

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Tuesday, June 24, 2014

From Fantasy to Sci-Fi to Mystery: Author Interview wtih Nancy J. Cohen

I am in awe at the number of books you have written and how you can easily move between the different fiction styles. When did you publish your first book?
My first book was published by Dorchester in 1994. Circle of Light was part of a trilogy and won the HOLT Medallion Award. This started my career as a paranormal/scifi romance author. After three books in the Light-Years trilogy, I wrote another standalone scifi romance before switching to mysteries.

How do you keep the writing fresh and contemporary after so many books?
It helps to change genres. That way, I don’t get tired of writing same old, same old. If I need to refresh my creative energy, it’s time to switch to my other series. Setting a story in a different location can also help keep things fresh as does bringing in new characters or changing the way my character relationships evolve. Plus I like to learn something new for each book, and it’s this issue or place or material that excites me and urges me to write the story.

How do you write? Did you do an outline first? Did you do individual character development before doing the full plot?
I develop my characters first and do preliminary research. When the story is swirling in my head, I write a synopsis. Then I put myself on a daily writing schedule of five pages per day or twenty-five pages per week.

What do you think you learned from writing your first novel that helped you in the second one?
I like to believe my writing skills improve with each book. In the early days, I didn’t fully understand Point of View. I think I finally got it by book three. You’re always learning.

Do you use any writing programs, such as Scrivener?
And no, I don’t use Scrivener or other writing programs except for my brain.

I love the mystery titles of your hairstylist sleuth. What made you decide to have a hairstylist be a crime solver?
What could be more fun to research? Seriously, a hair salon is a great background setting for a mystery series. People gossip to each other, confide in their hairdressers, walk in and out all day. And a hairstylist doesn’t have to be confined to a salon to do her work. She can do wedding parties at a hotel, for example. It’s a great way for the main character to meet new people and get involved in other persons’ lives. Besides, I admire Marla’s talent. I have no ability to do my own hair. Book One, Permed to Death, starts with Marla’s grumpy client dying in the shampoo chair while getting a perm.

How do you define the difference between a murder mystery and a cozy murder mystery?
A cozy mystery is a whodunit featuring an amateur sleuth, a distinctive setting, and a limited number of suspects, most of whom may know each other. These stories contain no explicit sex or violence. The focus is on the character relationships rather than on forensic details of the crime. It’s essential to present a puzzle that challenges readers to solve the mystery.

Where would an Agatha Christie or a Mary Higgins Clark book fit? 
Agatha Christie’s novels typify this genre. I’d put Mary Higgins Clark into the romantic suspense category. These stories have a personal element of psychological suspense that you won’t see in a cozy. As for a murder mystery itself, this can fit into any genre. I had a murder mystery in Warrior Prince, book one in my Drift Lords Series.

You’ve written a “how to write” book for cozy mysteries. What is unique about writing cozy mysteries in their formula?
This technique is what works for me, and I explain the details in my instructional guide, Writing the Cozy Mystery. I’ll start with the victim. Who is it? How was the person killed? Who would gain from their death? Thus begins the round of suspects who may be the victim’s friends, associates, or family. Next I assign each one a secret. It might or might not be a secret relating to the murder. But everyone will either have a motive or will seem suspicious. Then you decide how the sleuth will uncover the crime, plant clues and red herrings, and your story is born.

Your writing includes different facets of the romance genre. How do you define the difference between paranormal, fantasy and sci-fi?
My earlier books were termed futuristic romance. I think a large part of it is marketing hype. Now I call them sci-fi romance, but a purist of this definition might want more detailed descriptions of space vehicles and weaponry, for example. Futuristics in general tend to be more romance oriented. They can take place on a pre-technology world, for example. 

I view mine as scifi romances because they involve space travel and take place on other planets that are technologically advanced. Keeper of the Rings is an exception in this regard, but it still fits the genre. The hero comes from another world and knows the truth about the religion practiced by the inhabitants of the planet, Xan. And it’s a truth most believers won’t want to hear.

I interpret paranormal romance to be an umbrella term for extraordinary phenomenon. It could involve ESP, psychics, vampires, shape shifters. These stories can be dark and scary or light and funny. Usually they take place in our modern world.

Fantasy-based stories may be set on imaginary worlds or here on Earth. Elements of magic, sorcery, and myth are included in this genre.

In many cases, the elements are blended. My Drift Lords series involves all of these. It takes place in modern day times on Earth, but the heroes come from other planets. They seek the help of six Earth women who have special powers. Norse mythology is the basis for these stories that involve prophecy, magic, and creatures such as evil trolls. But space travel is also mentioned. So it’s a mixed genre bag of tricks. Think Star Wars meets Lord of the Rings.

How do you personally find time to do all the personal media attached to your website? Does someone assist you?
I do my own marketing and book trailers because I like having control over what goes out there in my name. I have, on occasion, used publicists or virtual assistants. It depends on what I need to get done. For social networking, I prefer to do it myself. However, I wouldn’t be averse to a street team if someone volunteered to create and lead one for me.

What suggestions do you have for enhancing a writer’s social media platform?
Connecting with readers is all important. I listen to feedback, respond to emails, send out a quarterly newsletter and run contests. Plus any writer should have the basics: a professional looking website and headshot, a Facebook author page, an Amazon author page, Twitter, Pinterest, Goodreads. Doing a blog is a personal choice but it’s another way to build platform and enhance your brand. Writing is a business as much as it is an art.

What has worked best for you in generating sales?
It’s hard to evaluate what works and what doesn’t. I think you need to be “out there” in as many forms and many ways as you can so your name gets heard. Writing blogs and posts and articles helps as well. I do speaking engagements, talk at conferences and libraries, and am active in local writing groups. But what really works? Writing books people want to read on a consistent basis

What is some of the best writing advice that you’ve received or could give?
“Throw a lot of spaghetti on the wall and see what sticks.” This is good advice for the beginning writer to find your particular niche. Once you start to get fan mail, you’ll see what resonates with readers. Since you never know what you’ll be writing tomorrow, it’s good to join different writing organizations and attend workshops in other genres. Keep learning, keep growing, and keep writing. Always have faith in yourself. And networking with other industry personnel is crucial to learning the business aspects of this career.

What is the next book that will be hitting the bookshelves and eReaders?

On the mystery front, I’ve turned in Peril by Ponytail, #12 in the Bad Hair Day Mysteries.

My latest release in this genre is Hanging by a Hair. Here the blurb:

Marla’s joyous move to a new house with her husband, Detective Dalton Vail, is marred by their next-door neighbor who erects an illegal fence between their properties. When Dalton reminds the man of the local permitting laws, tempers flare—and worse, the neighbor is found dead the following day. Dismayed when Dalton is removed from the case due to a conflict of interest,

Marla decides it’s up to her to find the killer. Can the intrepid hairstylist untangle the clues and pin down the culprit before he strikes again? 



Warrior Lord is an August 1, 2014 release from Wild Rose Press. This title is # 3 in my Drift Lords Series. Here is the story blurb: 

Pottery sculptor Erika Sherwood has no idea her televised wedding in Las Vegas is for real until an official confirms she and the stranger she’s just met are legitimately wed.

A Drift Lord and warrior of the Tsuran, Magnor tricks the redhead into marriage because she’s one of six women prophesied to save Earth. But as he’s forced into her company in their race against the apocalypse, he wonders if he risks his heart more than his life.

Can a free-spirited ceramic artist and a fierce swordsman trust each other enough to prevent disaster?